http://www.sterlingediting.com/exposition/ Editing, mentoring and coaching for writers Thu, 02 Sep 2010 22:48:15 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 http://www.sterlingediting.com/exposition/comment-page-1/#comment-78 Sterling Editing | Dialogue Don’ts (an exercise) Tue, 13 Oct 2009 15:15:46 +0000 http://www.sterlingediting.com/?p=686#comment-78 [...] As You Know Bob. John and Susan know what their jobs are; they wouldn’t need to tell each [...] [...] As You Know Bob. John and Susan know what their jobs are; they wouldn’t need to tell each [...]

]]> http://www.sterlingediting.com/exposition/comment-page-1/#comment-21 Nicola Tue, 15 Sep 2009 01:01:22 +0000 http://www.sterlingediting.com/?p=686#comment-21 Perhaps some writers watch too much soap opera :) And the thing is, it's so very easy to come up with way to weave information into fiction. Once a writer has learned how, s/he'll never have to make editors and agents shudder again. Perhaps some writers watch too much soap opera :) And the thing is, it’s so very easy to come up with way to weave information into fiction. Once a writer has learned how, s/he’ll never have to make editors and agents shudder again.

]]> http://www.sterlingediting.com/exposition/comment-page-1/#comment-20 Merrilee Mon, 14 Sep 2009 22:16:31 +0000 http://www.sterlingediting.com/?p=686#comment-20 Very useful suggestions! Sadly I still see a lot of "as you know Bob" moments in manuscripts... Very useful suggestions! Sadly I still see a lot of “as you know Bob” moments in manuscripts…

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